trevbushell

summery song, a gentle style that builds up (so be patient)
pretty much all done with soundfonts...
i posted this and then removed it thinking i may be posting too much of my stuff (let me know if i am), but i really have valued you guys opinions so far as it has helped me alot already!
also radiocolonel posted about this song so thought id put it up again.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/jc.bushell/deepblue4.mp3


listen out for the guest whale appearance!

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Russ

Nice work trev, I like this one a lot, especially the first 3 1/2 minutes or so. Keep up the good work

-Russ

Russ

Just a little feedback:
Again, I really like the first 3 1/2 minutes of the song. It builds up very well. I was sorta of expecting it to go into a lead/melody (or something like that) after that point, but it instead kinda jumped into the heavier drums (the transition didn't seem to flow like the rest of the song). I would love to see the song extended to add a lead/melody part or something (I know it is easier said than done).

The song has a little bit of an Enya feel to it. I really like it. It is my favorite of your self made stuff so far. You seem to be getting better and better with every new song. Good work.

-Russ

trevbushell

thnx russ, hmmm....yeah i'll take your feedback and will have a look at some kind of lead melody later into song.. see what i can come up with edit- maybe even using a asynth patch??lol

the drums were done like that as a kind of surprise element, so not sure about changing them but ill have a look at that too and any other feedback from others about this part would be appreciated.

thnx for the positive comment re getting better.... !! all of you guys inputting has really helped to focus where i need to improve and has helped sooo much... so cheers!
russ.. thnx for all your input... i really appreciate your interest! really helps
trev

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Russ

My feedback is just meant to give you some ideas. I could say the same thing about some songs I hear on the radio, etc, so please do not feel like you have to change anything based on my feedback. I do like the song as it is.

trevbushell

yeah thnx russ, your idea is worth looking into. especially as radiocolonel posted this on the other thread which kind of matches up to your comment as hes thinking about adding some guitar so might be cool?


so radiocolonel... see if you can do something where russ said it might do with some extra melody when the extra drum track comes in? (if you think it works)
trev

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radiocolonel.it

... Ok, that's fine, i'll try to make some,!!!
Last night i was trying to record some but i have to think how to make it sound "natural"...

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trevbushell

hows it going radiocolonel? anything promising?
trev

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radiocolonel.it

... I'm studying statistics, i have an exam next week... so i guess i'lldo nothing till next tuesday, !
It takes time fo me to record guitar with a good sound and playing with inspiration!

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trevbushell

whoww sounds intense! good luck with it. im off on hols for 2 weeks from wednesday so see you when i get back on 20th july!
have fun
trev

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Russ

Hi trev,
I was just listening to this song again. I still like it. I keep checking your page for new songs... Are you working on anything?

trevbushell

thnx russ, glad you still like it.

yes, ive got a few tunes im working on.... very slowly though.... 5yr old girl and pregnant wife and other stuff. will post as soon as ive got someting on the way enough for listening

... nice to hear you check on my post for new music. i had a feeling people werent into my style too much as there seems to be alot of blues and rock on this site...



got a new website starting though.... in VERY early days, but its got lots more of my 1970's band on it. go to this site and click on the two circles which will take you to 'my music' and 'my band'.

theres also a couple of older songs you can listen to "drumb" (drum and bass try!!) and "compassion" which was a very chilled repetitive thing made from one of my own live drumming rhythms i liked.

to hear the songs so just click on the buttons at the bottom of the vending machine...

http://www.enginecreations.com/trevb/index.htm

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Russ

Nice Jukebox, but the coin slots down line up right in FireFox.

Again, all you band stuff is really good.
I also listened to "drumb", "robsong", and "compassion".
Generally, I liked them all, although "compassion was a little too repetitive for me (as you said), but it does have a nice sound to it. Keep up the good work.

As for personal taste. Although everyone has there own personal taste, many of us like a wide variety of music, and most peole can appreciate good stuff, even if it is not the type of music they normaly listen to.

trevbushell

thanx russ for letting me know! will sort that out.

thanx for listening to the others.. robsong is my recordings of my little girl talking when she was 1-2yrs old! so very sentimental for me really nothing more!!

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Russ

That should say 'don't' and not 'down'.

As for RobSong... lol, I think I must have clicked on the wrong coin slot because I do not remember hearing any little girl talking... I wonder which one I actually listened to . In any case, I just listened to the real RobSong, and it is very cute, with a nice backing melody .