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Old Oct 25, 2004, 07:34 PM   #1
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Pain of Tears

I wrote this about a year before I ended my last relationship. Which lasted for 5 years.
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So hollow within,
now where should I begin.
Was it my fate,
to be the one you will always hate.

Empty are my eyes,
with them my heart cries.

I must have created,
the reason why I am so hated.
What can I do,
when sometimes I don't even care about you.

Now I am asleep,
in that time my whole body weeps.

All I see is sorrow,
and hope I will feel better tomorrow.
Unlike today,
when all I do is pay.

You I am without,
and all I can do is shout.
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Old Oct 26, 2004, 11:36 PM   #2
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I just love that!!!! Awsome writing, just love it!! Feel free to share more.
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Old Oct 27, 2004, 03:24 PM   #3
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