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Old Oct 17, 2004, 08:25 PM   #1
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Depressed

I sat and was depressed some months ago and wrote this... it's not finished and I don't know if it'll ever be.

The world is coming to an End
can you feel it too, my friend?
everything that we desire
consequence just keeps rocketing higher.

Ignorance, hate and disillusion
growing rapidly into planetary confusion
six billion people left to feed
another billion in plan for breed.

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Old Oct 17, 2004, 09:51 PM   #2
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Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!Falstaff is just super!

this could develope into a song man...keep it up..
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Old Oct 17, 2004, 11:47 PM   #3
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i like it so far. u should try and finish it...
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Old Oct 18, 2004, 07:17 AM   #4
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Thanks for the inpout guys.
I'll try to finish it, but then I need to be as depressed again as back then, else it'll just sound false and not like a part of the first 2 verses...

I'll do my best to get depressed
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Old Oct 18, 2004, 11:21 AM   #5
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Yeah, good. no people=no emotion; more people=much emotion.
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Old Oct 20, 2004, 08:14 PM   #6
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It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...
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Old Oct 20, 2004, 08:33 PM   #7
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Cool... sounds like it could be made into a good Tool song
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Old Oct 21, 2004, 04:35 AM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ript_Van_Winkle
It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...
I don't know who Dr. Seuss is... but I can asure you it's homebred.

And thanks for the nice comments, guys.
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Old Oct 21, 2004, 04:59 AM   #9
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Quote:
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It sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme...
That isn't really a constructive criticism... and if we're going to criticise work here, lets at least make it useful criticism?
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