Raps? Rhymes?

TheOpposition

Just Saying stuff to practice...

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Anyone out here that wanna bust out some ryhmes?/
Don't challenge me please if someone else writes your lines./
Rhymes flow through my head as fast as Nuclear fission/
they come at you like a mid-air collision/
Spreading your body parts all over different countries...now thats long division/
You have to understand kid, that this ain't no joke/
come up against me and you had better not choke/
This is my Stadium, and I don't shoot blanks, I aim to bank it off your cranium/
Children please! this isn't a game/
I'm not a real person, I'm a weapon with it's own brain.
So step up, and please make this decision/
Only know that I am deaths own apparition/
And your final Opposition.
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I read it over and it doesn't seem to flow very well =/

Anyways come back with your own stuff. And keep this going

patje

not bad, but some parts don't really read that fluent indeed, still nice tough.

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out of the shadow I come to play
this is my life, this is the only way
Fear is your friend if your hart can take it
I have what it takes, I will make it
Those who are in my way will see
a challenge so big their minds will flee
You will regret the choice you made
but the problem is, you made it to late
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that's enough for now, hope to see some people will continue this

GutterPunk

I dont like rap
i think its all crap
who cares how well you can rhyme
its not hard i do it all the time
you better back up son
you better start to run
you know im white
but ur mind is right
so u blow right outta my sight
dont battle me
cuz you know ull see
that my skills are bad
bad as can be
my skin color says alot
i got skills you know it... not

i dislike rap, the 'music' isnt my favorite. it dont take skill to rhyme it takes skill to flow.

DarkerFate

(A good first post for a forum.. )

You'll never understand the pain,
that has driven me totally insane,
and there's nothing from it you can gain,
so I tell you this again..
that I am anything - other - than - sane.

(supposed to be slow in the end.. )

Ev!L-aLphA

HOLY CRAP UR GOOD!

Ript_Van_Winkle

Now here's the thing...fool, you just better bust it out
The obligatory statement you made was fulla clout
Think yer fuckin' funny kid-why don't you battle it out
and straddle it out and rattle it out-maybe then ya can shout
about that tired ass game that you call resurrection
The punk ass rock scene you front-a dissection
Those fuckaz ended that shit years ago
You too slow, you canna roll wit' tha big boyz so-
You talk shit about tha gangs that range 'cross tha states
tha fuckin' 48 intercontinental display
too many G's fuckin' frontin' and stuntin' not enough bluntin'
So roll the somethin' for nothin' and smoke that puffity-puffin'
Take a fuckin' weed nap, bitch for I slap you good 'cuz I would
'cuz I'm back in the hood like I should you know it's betta
When it's to fuckin' wetta to smoke and toke and leave paperz
for tha shakaz and bakerz be screamin forties and vapors!

And I don't even like rap.

Ript_Van_Winkle

There was never a challenge to my flow...

What, you suckers AFRAID?

halocarbon

rap is good, dont know why u hate it
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step back, its time to flip the page
or move over and get re arranged
mc's are united thru hurt and pain
but u look like u really are insane
coz u'd be dissin rap when u talking crap and u flippin suck
get out of my face before i bash you in the head with my monster truck
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continue the battle

halocarbon

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nobody i fit enough to handle me
may its the way i affect the beats
free style is the key
where is the rhyme
dont u think its time
to continue this hype
or u'll just chicken out
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the rap continues

Callandor

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I bust your spleen
Rip off your sheen
Man, where you been
You look alot like a hyped teen

It's wank masta flex up in yo face
Sprayin it all ova wit a can o' mace
What's da matter, can't keep da pace?
Strangle you & yo kids with just a shoe lace

Yo shoes look nice
But they be cheaper than rice
You I will slice
And the chicks I will entice

I come into you like a thousand brick wall
Ramming your head in like a hobo in da mall
Too poor? Well, then start a weed stall
And maybe you'll be able to afford to go to da ball

uh.......

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Sandok

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I wonder why people dislike rap
And no, it's not another form of crap
Trust me, you really need to hear
what i got to say, so open those ears
as I get up and and stomp on you
makin the world collaspe with a big moo
sounding like some cow with nowhere to run
well listen to me punk, you'd better hid with some nuns
as i come after you and hit you in a ditch
makin you moan and scream "b*tch"
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I totally suck okay... Just thought I'd write something

Callandor

Good stuff sandok. I think that was great for a freestyle.

Off da dome man!!!!

Sandok

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When I come back tomz from school
guess what everyone, i'll be playing something cool
it starts with a H, finishes with a 2
and i know you will be playing it too
yes, our geeky god gorden is finally back
and will be busting everything off the rack
as we log onto STEAM
and can finally stop our dreams
be ready for a whirl, HL2 is finally coming to the world!!!
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LOL just had to make some shit up

TJ-

u guys suck...

i write lyrics for a living and would dominate all you fuckers...

stuff is all copywrighted so cant post any of it...

Sandok

Well that was kind

If your soo good, then write something... I'm sure you can think of something since you do that...

YAYitsAndrew

mary had a little lamb
little lamb
little lamb
mary had a little lamb
whose fleece was white as snow.
word.

solar_flare

step back as i unleash a solar flare

burn your fuckin eye brows of and your pubic hair
you think dudes give damn, you think they care

leave you standing there naked and ashamed
my lyrics were once wild, now there tamed




not bad i guess .how about we judge all the lyrics we see and rate the out of hundred. not to prove whose better the who, but so one can improve on him/herself.

solar_flare

cool and very funny rhymes.way to go dude....way to go

Sandok

That marry had a little lamb is the ULTIMATE rhyme

TJ-

ok then


fuck all you slimy bastards,
you make me squirm just like all them fat birds (chicks in australia)
i can rap rhyme circles around the DH forums
sandok your nothing but a damn squirl,
the centrifical force that makes me hurl
an animical being sent to unfurl
the laws of physics and the right to recurl
into a little ball of shit,
now that i think, this aint worth my time
so fuck you, you dirty, scumy piece of grime

Xx#1BallerxX

Before you start makin fun of other people's work, why don't you put up your stuff and then you can judge everybody else. Plus, how do you know that all of this is copywrighted?

Xx#1BallerxX

Here's my shit:

These bitches don't want me balling, they want me bury
Thrown in the dirt, from shots flurry
Laying with bugs under my shirt
I got plans to hop up in that Hummer
'Cause I'mma stunner, I sit back and wonder
When them angels gon' call my number
Under, my chest is a heart of a lion
I ain't lieing , bounty hunters got me flying
With my iron, you high as a giant
I'm running from nothing, my stomach is touching
What I'm clutching, to give you more then a concussion
End of discussion

My blood is colder, so I'm bolder
Hood on my my shoulder
Looking in the mirror, I see a soldier
Take my pistol out it's holder
Make em put you in the ground and cover you wit a boulder

(boulder means tombstone incase you didn't get it)

solar_flare

wwwwwwwwooooooooowwwwwwwww....you got some ill rhymes...im impressed..

Sandok

Dude these rock... Way better than mine

Xx#1BallerxX

Thanks for the complement about my rhymes. It took me a while for that one because it so long and how complicated the lyrics are, but I love the end product. Thanks again for the complement.

TJ-

you fucken copier---!!!

thats 50 cents shit...man you should be shot

[hobo]eclipse

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Slowly, surely, carelessly selecting,
The paths, n the passes,
and the switching of the tactics........

The lost, feelings
of believing
without seeing....

racing for the station
I feel a motion's loss
Hating, creating for wat its done
n wat its cost

So where is it now,
its better off this way
The lost reflection of ones self,
filtered through your dream

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jus alil sumtin sumtin, wass da dilly yo?

Senor_Mota