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Aug 12, 2004, 01:41 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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Location: Red Lodge UK
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fallen leaves
her neck and face filled with blush and glow
she waited till the rain warmed on her skin she felt his kiss, his caress and his love grow they lay in the damp fallen leaves, and she consumed him. |
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Aug 13, 2004, 04:25 AM
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Former Mobility Modman
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had to read it 3 times to understand it (guess due to my english) , but I think it's really good.
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Aug 13, 2004, 11:01 AM
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thankyou, used to write love poetry to all my wives..lol
I am looking for something like Haiku A little vignette in time. A visual effect or transformation when you read it. |
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Aug 20, 2004, 10:11 AM
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very nice poem . i dont think it can be used in english class tho lol
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Aug 20, 2004, 10:55 AM
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can so...laddy chatterlys lover, the scarlet letter...my darling my hamburger....my daughter read that in english class. I guess it is a damn sight better than forum letters from Penthouse, and less graphic, therefore the better
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Aug 20, 2004, 04:49 PM
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boo!!!!
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good one jeff
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Aug 20, 2004, 07:29 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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thanx stig
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Aug 20, 2004, 07:30 PM
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boo!!!!
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Ft. Meyers, FL
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np man was very good, and i don't make it to this forum often so u know it was good.
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