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Aug 12, 2004, 10:51 AM
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Time speaks
Well, this is actually a first attempt to make something.
Personally, I like it, but that's just me  I don't think it is according to the "rules" of poetry but rules can be bend  
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Aug 13, 2004, 04:23 AM
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Yep, this is all homebrew stuff.
Well the the last line is actually from a song named "Time is on my side" You should watch the movie "Fallen" with Denzel Washinton, it gets mentionend during that movie. btw, it's a really good movie.
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Aug 13, 2004, 11:00 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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Oh yes I remember, he was possessed by a demon, that was a scary movie, since that is pricisely how demons possess people, they perpetuate themselves. A person cannot become an angel by doing good works on earth, but they can become a demon by being evil enough.
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