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Jun 15, 2004, 04:31 AM
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DriverHeaven Lover
Join Date: Apr 2004
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dig me
it's here i sit and rust amid this ruin and rancor
like tire irons toothy grills and car parts before me... the acid rain floods my floorboard, burns my pores, and rots my upholstery... once i was worshipped, polished magnificently, now i lay in decay by the dirty angry bay I'm ready to leave I wanna get out of here I'm ready to ride away I don't wanna die in here I'm ready to ride... my skin is metallic now, no longer an elegant powder blue my body unhinged and sleeping in the jungle of motor block manifolds and metal relics what was deluxe becomes debris i never questioned loyalty but this dead end demolishes the dream of an open highway dig me...but don't...bury me |
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Jun 15, 2004, 07:53 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
Posts: 15,724
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wow, wonder what the illustration would look like?
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Jun 15, 2004, 11:12 AM
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DriverHeaven's Angel
Join Date: Jun 2003
Posts: 216
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I like that, it gives a very good mental picture
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Jun 16, 2004, 09:29 PM
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Mr. Nobody
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: OmniPresent Nightwatcher
Posts: 5,933
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I like it!!!
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Jun 21, 2004, 12:18 PM
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DriverHeaven Lover
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 123
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Adrian Belew
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