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Jun 3, 2004, 12:37 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
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Controversy
This again is a lil about me and my girl... gossip assimilation... everyone goes through it... Im from a town of 500 people (Hershey, Nebraska USA) Here everyone gossips about any irregularities, height age defect it dont matter... cliques are huge, and people do anything to fit in. Some people like msyelf are different and dont like assimilation or comformity. I like to be myself... Again, this is straight from what i say/type no changes (cept for spelling)... Welp here goes
Controversy I love you so much brittany I just get sick of the scrutiny all the people chatter just one day i hope they scatter they dont understand we have 1 thing they will never have the comprehension they will never savvy they will always pick around their band We try to take a stand against those stupid pricks residing in annoying cliques together we fight this battle hand in hand Its not like this in every town the bigger the city the better off we would be where everybody doesnt want to see what we do in your private lives not even if we cut eachother with knives they would go on in their own lives as we graduate and move on we will leave these stupid fools who will be lost in the pools of not having anyone to fall back on these people will never make it they are to busy messing everyone else up living their lives being stuck up Never letting anyone in without comformity If you ask me i think its bullshit that they cant accept anyone not even us not bothering them we live our lives away from them but yet they still interfere |
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Jun 3, 2004, 12:39 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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pretty good bro
the babysitter or sammy couldnt make ya write like that, where does it come from? |
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Jun 3, 2004, 12:41 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
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Comes from my special someone Brittany, and the persecution of the assholes that think everyone should do what they do
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Jun 3, 2004, 12:42 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
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know what ya mean bro..I do
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Jun 3, 2004, 04:11 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
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it takes serious skill to use pricks and bullshit in a poem and still give it an artistic feel.....great work...and don't let people get to ya, envy is the first part of hatred, and don't forget it
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Jun 3, 2004, 05:32 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
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wow nice words prodigal, i was upset when i wrote this lol... i figured some vulgarity will give it clarity, not sure if it worked right. it wasnt fully going towards an artsy feeling but more free expressions, thanks for the comment. is it okay to hate... hate?
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Jun 3, 2004, 05:36 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
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hating hate seems rather paradoxical and a bit hypocritical
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Jun 3, 2004, 05:37 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
Posts: 5,854
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ur right, i dont hate i dislike.... lots lol
 people go hatin on others i dont hate back just dont associate |
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Jun 3, 2004, 05:43 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
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there ya go
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