GutterPunk

I always talk to myself poetically.... thats how i share my thoughts... sometimes its good sometimes it sucks

this is the 1 time that i recorded as i was driving home... needs work but to me the original thought means the most... i will be posting more sometime

Kept away

Why cant we be
why dont they just leave us alone
i dont understand what they see
to keep us apart by turning me to stone

we cant see eachother
we cant even talk
just because they dont want us together
i cringe every moment i notice were apart as lookin at the clock
the time that passes by without being with you

I want to be with you night and day
hopefully someday hun
as every night i pray
that some day we can be one

Sometime we will be together
when no one will even bother
to keep us away from eachother

When the time comes
when everthing we worked for sums
we will have a house and family
together living the life weve always wanted

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Falstaff

pretty good greg, keep it up

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pr0digal jenius

you're more coherent talkign to yourself then I am when i try to talk to others...lol....awesome work tho., keep em comin

drakesteakn

very good work!!!

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GutterPunk

for those who gave me sh!t for talking to myself its on the road during 8 hour long drives... what else does a kid got to do? lol

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Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~

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pr0digal jenius

i sing along with the radio..it's all good

GutterPunk

thats much different lol.... i sing too but then i talk to myself lol

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Rock On \m/ Thank you Mousey for the Sig!
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Intel Core2Duo E6660 (3.4GHZ) ~ Tuniq Tower 120 ~ Enermax Galaxy 1000W ~ Corsair Dominator @ 1090MHZ 5-5-5-15 (OCZ XTC Modded Cooler)~ EVGA 8800GTX W/ HR-03 Plus 120MM ~ Asus DVD-RW LiteScribe ~ LG DVD-RW ~ Corsair Voyager 2GB ReadyBoost Drive ~ Vantec Nexus Fan Controller ~ ThermalTake Armor 25CM fan ~

.-'*'-. GutterPunk's Band to check out .-'*'-. Genre = Ska.-'*'-. Band = Big D and the Kids Table.-'*'-.

pr0digal jenius

lol....i talk to myself in the shower....but not the car...lol

Patricia

good poem...
talking to yourself is fine...it is when you start answering yourself that you should worry

pr0digal jenius

.....damn....

mainman

brilliant bud, really like it...

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