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Oct 11, 2007, 08:33 AM
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BeardHeaven
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One of these days
One of these days,
your lucks gonna change, all the pain, you'll find, has left you far behind. One of these days, the suns gonna shine on you, like you know that it should do. One of these days, the weight that you carry, is gonna fall away, listen to what i say. Im telling you, One of these days, you'll find, all good things come through. Im telling you, One of these days, all things must come, through Love. d.white 11 oct 2007 |
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Oct 24, 2007, 12:02 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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is this to any particuler song you had in your mind?
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Oct 24, 2007, 04:46 AM
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BeardHeaven
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its not a song yet, but
i only started writing poems through song writing, so many of my writings have a song like quality, they need a bit of work to turn them either one way or the other. i wrote this for friend who was having a bad time with relationships and all that stuff, she seems allright last time i saw her. |
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Oct 24, 2007, 01:29 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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I kind of used to the same myself, till I could hold my hand on the frets, just strum now and then, but Yeah I agree, it is easier I suppose to use melody and chords to find your poetic truth.
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I have lived a blessed life, and the first of my blessings was the family I was born into. people who are willing to die for an ideal are unstoppable people willing to die for a country are unbeatable people who are willing to sacrifice anything to survive are unconquerable but people who have the courage to die for peace are the greatest of all-jwf
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Nov 5, 2007, 02:26 PM
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BeardHeaven
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i think a lot of peotry is very musical and in its own way harmonious.
Its a great way to get inspiration going, just jamming away for a bit on a guitar or something. I do it both ways, sometimes just paper other times with instruments or tracks allready recorded. Last edited by Esaz666 : Nov 5, 2007 at 02:34 PM. |
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