Whoa, it's large... couldn't it have been made somewhat smaller, or is it really long?
Ogg Vorbis is always good...
I'll edit my thoughts into this post when it finishes downloading in an hour or so.
Edit: Yeah, it took a bit more than an hour, sorry. There's nothing wrong with the song, but I need a riff or melody that stands out in order to make a song memorable to me. There was a good amount of variation in the song, to keep it interesting. And good job with the mixing, it's not too loud.