Wow, you have some great sounds (and combinations of sounds) in there. I like this one a lot more
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You have a lot more variation, and it sounds more musical to me (as opposed to being mostly rhythm based). It starts out a little slow for my taste (maybe a minute too long at the beginning, without any variation), and there is a part in the middle that sort of sounds like the song ends, and a different song begins, but overall I like it.
Great job
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