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Hi dj_stick,
I keep trying to evaluate this to provide some useful feedback, but honestly it is a little hard to do. It is really long, and it is not really my style of music (and again, I do not think that my speakers do it justice).
There is some good stuff in there, but it seems to me, to be more like the backing track of some other song (maybe that is just because it is not my style of music). i.e. I think it needs something to break it up a bit (vocals, melody, something), as it seems to get a little monotonous (doesn't hold my attention). It reminds me a little bit of Industrial Metal, like the Electric Hellfire Club or something, but missing components like vocals (not necessarly singing vocals), and guitar, etc. I am not really sure what you were going for here, so it is hard to give feedback, but I think it would be better if you added some more components to the song, or changed it up a little more often. In any case, it is just my opinion, which is probably based heavily on the style of music that I listen to the most...
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