between heaven and hell

Falstaff · Apr 5, 2006, 04:22 PM

I dont know why people hate the color gray
why mortals run to the sunlight every single day.
darkness and shadows help me take the pain away.
give me silence and twilight I have nothing to say.
find your green fields of grass and hay
find reasons to be in love , find new things to say.
For I have never cared much anyway.
I wait for the salvation of death and you still pray.
swallowed by the darkness I can only obey.
among the forgotten souls, between heaven and hell , I will lay.

SFOSOK · Apr 5, 2006, 06:08 PM

I like it : )

**Asmoday** · Apr 5, 2006, 10:18 PM

Same as GDF, those words would fit nicely into a song prefferably a metal song..

Falstaff · Apr 5, 2006, 10:26 PM

I guess I was in a metal mood when I wrote it..
the darkness, the deep void of nothingness is sancturary

**Asmoday** · Apr 5, 2006, 10:29 PM

Well, I liked it alot....

Falstaff · Apr 6, 2006, 01:26 AM

thanx man...
I wish I could write down all the stuff that comes to mind when I am driving, I tried recording it on a tape player but my voice sounds like Kenny on Southpark

SFOSOK · Apr 6, 2006, 02:07 AM

lol. Most my thoughts that are good come at in-opertune times. That does sound like a metal song, u know, u could use that and sell it.

Falstaff · Apr 6, 2006, 08:08 AM

I wrote some poetry when I was in grade school and tried to write a book in high school, we lived overseas and they printed it but never published it, like the school paper, it rests in a shoebox with other memories in storage..LOL.
I have lived through three conflicts and I swear it is hard for me to find things to write about, I am touched by the simple things in life. Children and families, death and life, you know..

SFOSOK · Apr 6, 2006, 10:37 PM

yeah I hear ya. I am goin to Virginia pretty soon and if I can find a good job and a way to support myself I may try to live there for as long as I can instead of bumming at my brother's and his wife's house. Really I'm trying to get away from this hell hole. Every state I've been to I have just been amazed at how different it is than this crappy one. I know all the states have their crappy people but I'm tired of the fakeness that is here.

I know Virginia to be a beautiful place and wonderful to write there though I have never seen it or even a picture of it. I know any place is better than here.

Falstaff · Apr 7, 2006, 02:15 AM

I used to go to Norfolk quite a bit, I like Damneck..Virginia is beautiful and they have a tech industry too, worth a look or two at least, I know Georgia is getting bigger and better.

brutusmaximus · Apr 9, 2006, 06:17 PM

quite dark yet uplifting.

anymore jeff?

Falstaff · Apr 9, 2006, 08:29 PM

yes..perhaps I will create some soon..thankyou