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Jan 27, 2006, 01:15 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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autumn poem
In haste she bore only her desire to stand before him at the fire glowing red her body warmed by the flame from anticipation, only his lust remained Sabine maiden with emerald eyes subdued the warrior with naked thighs through her garden he knows he must bury his sword with one deep thrust rapture and joy their body intertwined visions of heaven fill their minds till the fire grows colder and the coming light reveal the lovers on this autumn night |
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Jan 27, 2006, 01:19 AM
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Intelligence?
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: On the edge of insanity
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thats pretty good. Made me think dirty thoughts (intentionally i presume). Different, but good. Nice one falstaff.
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Jan 27, 2006, 01:59 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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thanx...
I am not always such a randy bloke...but I like the angst of youth...the energy...it is the only gift we truly should enjoy.. |
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Jan 27, 2006, 02:01 AM
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Intelligence?
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: On the edge of insanity
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You don't have to tell this college kid, angst and energy is what we strive on
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