hey tom, ive missed this thread for some reason. sorry
youre doing well, good strong songs great melodies etc
song 1 mixed well, nice drums (esp like the off beat rhythm.. i would though as i am a drummer at heart!

) really strong tune. it feels like it needs a melody line and good strong vocals though. it feels like the song is a great backing track waiting for this to finish the song off, do you see what i mean? i'm saying that becasuse i like the song alot.
just to say that I'm terrible at melodies and vocals which is why none of my songs have them either so i cant really talk can i!!
song 2- yep the same,... good song. well put together.... esp liked the mid 8 with the "supertramp style" organ. again waiting vocals?
song 3- not my preference but still good.
overall great songwriting skills -welldone. all tracks well thought of and put together
trev!