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Jun 2, 2004, 01:44 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
Posts: 5,854
Rep Power: 42
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*Kept Away* Just a quickie... no edits
I always talk to myself poetically.... thats how i share my thoughts... sometimes its good sometimes it sucks
this is the 1 time that i recorded as i was driving home... needs work but to me the original thought means the most... i will be posting more sometime
Kept away
Why cant we be
why dont they just leave us alone
i dont understand what they see
to keep us apart by turning me to stone
we cant see eachother
we cant even talk
just because they dont want us together
i cringe every moment i notice were apart as lookin at the clock
the time that passes by without being with you
I want to be with you night and day
hopefully someday hun
as every night i pray
that some day we can be one
Sometime we will be together
when no one will even bother
to keep us away from eachother
When the time comes
when everthing we worked for sums
we will have a house and family
together living the life weve always wanted
Last edited by GutterPunk; Jun 2, 2004 at 02:56 PM.
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Jun 2, 2004, 02:57 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
Posts: 15,980
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pretty good greg, keep it up
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Jun 2, 2004, 03:08 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 14,676
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you're more coherent talkign to yourself then I am when i try to talk to others...lol....awesome work tho., keep em comin
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Jun 2, 2004, 03:19 PM
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boo!!!!
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Ft. Meyers, FL
Posts: 2,025
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very good work!!!
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Jun 2, 2004, 03:23 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
Posts: 5,854
Rep Power: 42
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for those who gave me sh!t for talking to myself its on the road during 8 hour long drives... what else does a kid got to do? lol
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Jun 2, 2004, 03:46 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 14,676
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i sing along with the radio..it's all good
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Jun 2, 2004, 05:26 PM
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I = Greatest Dood
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: PuNk
Posts: 5,854
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thats much different lol.... i sing too but then i talk to myself lol
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Jun 2, 2004, 06:04 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 14,676
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lol....i talk to myself in the shower....but not the car...lol
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Jun 2, 2004, 06:47 PM
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DriverHeaven's Angel
Join Date: Jun 2003
Posts: 216
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good poem...
talking to yourself is fine...it is when you start answering yourself that you should worry  |
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Jun 2, 2004, 07:01 PM
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Delete Me
Join Date: Mar 2004
Posts: 14,676
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.....damn....
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Jun 2, 2004, 09:54 PM
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Mr. Nobody
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: OmniPresent Nightwatcher
Posts: 5,933
Rep Power: 45
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brilliant bud, really like it...  |
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