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Feb 22, 2008, 04:41 PM
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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention
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why sit?
why sit in the temple with your
spotless clothes?, why you are there?, nobody knows, you prostrate, and cry, but god has not arrived. he is out, with the man who made the road( to the temple), the dirty man who you threw out, gentle , with last years spotless clothes. |
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Feb 25, 2008, 06:52 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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this reminds me of a sanskrit text translated
you should try Haiku, I bet you would excel at that as well. |
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Feb 27, 2008, 02:32 PM
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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention
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yeah you are right,
it is an indian idea, i just quickly wrote it, because i loved the idea so much, thanks. |
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Feb 27, 2008, 11:54 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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its a good one...
keep up the good work |
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