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Nov 26, 2007, 01:01 PM
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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention
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Civilisation circus
On television what do I see, there’s nothing there, only shadows be. I’m walking down uncivilisation street, we tell lies, you can realise. Uncivilisation, its only a word, we call it progress, move in a heard. Towards your own goal, eyes forward, do what your told. Follow a myth, if that’s what your like, there’s no escape, for heavens sake. A beautiful illusion for us to make, an illusion based on give and take. Taken from all the world, give nothing back. It’s only civilisation, that we lack. As we are broken by our own deeds and word, wretched, we begin again, like children. 7.11.25 |
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Nov 27, 2007, 05:11 PM
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VETUS INFLATIO
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: Red Lodge UK
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forgive me but the rhythem seems much like a song plucked on a guitar, is that how you write?
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Nov 28, 2007, 05:28 AM
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BeardHeaven
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Uk,Earth,Universe,3rd dimention
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 not this time, i just wrote it , but my stuff does sound like songs through ,as i do like a good twang on a guitar!, unfortunately for anyone who is near  |
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