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Apr 11, 2007, 04:28 AM
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She looks at me with sadness in her eyes What has been taken can never be replaced Her choice was one of severed fate Though this suffering I cannot hide I take this weight in full stride Her words, her touch they burrow deep Into the soul with an outward reach The thorns of love, they claw away To destroy my heart soon this day Odd it is this thing called love To be thrown away like a stray dog Kept for so long with no where to go Back to his master he returns to know How can something so long ago hurt so much? The heart is shattered with just one touch The pieces I am left to collect myself And set this vase upon a shelf In hopes to be dusted off one day For it is this love I pray -Kellenberger, Jonathan J. Last edited by SFOSOK; May 25, 2007 at 02:57 PM. |
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Apr 11, 2007, 04:40 AM
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I = Greatest Dood
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awww touching!
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Apr 11, 2007, 06:08 AM
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VETUS INFLATIO
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very good....
does the author have any other poetry? |
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Apr 11, 2007, 01:17 PM
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Yes though most of it was back in the days I liked to complain about pretty much everything.
Just wanted to get back into writing so I thought I would start with this. I'm glad you enjoy it though I have some better ones and hopefully some more to follow. I should have seperated some of the ideas and branched off specific poems for each but I just figured I'd write and see how it came together. |
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Apr 11, 2007, 03:33 PM
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